V
Don't come cryin' 'round here no more
Don't tell me what's wrong
I don't care what happens now
As long as you're movin' on
You go east and I'll go west
All your bags are packed
There ain't nothin' left to see
Don't you dare look back
Chorus
Go Away
Go Away
Go Away
You're my... Mistake
V
A heart made of stone so cold
You're head's full of lies
The ghosts of your bitterness
Hide behind empty eyes
All those years that I trusted you
Now those days have been lost
See your cold dead heart tangled up
In that line you have crossed
Chorus
Go Away
Go Away
Go Away
You're my... Mistake
Go Away
Go Away
Go Away
You're my...
my...
my...
You're my... Mistake
15 November 2005
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2 comments:
Woop! New addition to the last verse. This one is getting good. Thanks Kent!
I like the driving rhythm of this one. Lot of confidence in it. I could suggest working the phraseology to add more vocal texture in the verse, (a driving, short breathed pushing along that might be in the emotion of the music?) and maybe an added sense of crescendo in the chorus.
I hear violin and cello accompanient in the interlude beteen verses.
this is a strong song, i think it deserves a myspace posting also.
bill
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