07 November 2005

Time to Go Now - ©2005

V
How long have you been reachin'
searching for a passing feeling
not really sure of who you are

It's sometimes hard to be strong
when everything just goes wrong
you're feelin' like a falling star

V
You've spent your whole life dreaming
making plans and always scheming
you've never really lived at all

You'll never get yourself right
by going down without a fight
it's time for you to stand up tall

Chorus
Time to go now
Go now
On to somethin' new

Time to go now
Go now
Do all you can do

V
It's hard to keep believing
when you can't find the reasons
you sometimes stumble in the dark

You've gotten tired of all the pain
too many fingers in the flames
when all you need is just a spark

V
If you could just reach deep inside
get rid of all your foolish pride
how long will you keep hangin' on

You say you're not sure what to do
or how to make those missing dreams come true
truth is you've known it all along

Chorus
Time to go now
Go now
On to somethin' new

Time to go now
Go now
Do all you can do

Reprise Verse
How long have you been reachin'
searching for a passing feeling
not really sure of who you are...

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

The guitar picking and note clarity is really great hear. I think i like the intro speed best for the song, maybe. How would it sound if the intro was fast and song slow? that would suggest coming out odf a fast paced world and into a motre reflective thought. You might even if you wanted to go that way add in some street sounds or door opening/closing as effects to bring it home...(just ideas)

I could suggest to wrap the lyrics even more than you have over the edges of the verse music. So at the slower pace sing the first line ending the first line on "searching" and the second line ending on "sure", then delay, to finish up on "of who you are" only.


Again these are just creative ideas from things i am hearing.

also again i think the song is very strong and has great potential. Great work.